jerseycajun on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/jerseycajun/art/Sketchdump-436538294jerseycajun

Deviation Actions

jerseycajun's avatar

Sketchdump

By
Published:
122 Views
Image size
2550x2122px 1.65 MB
© 2014 - 2024 jerseycajun
Comments3
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Sol-Caninus's avatar
your work is progressing very nicely and, apparently, methodically. 

I Like the swing in the girl's stride.  The placement of the parts - proportions - location of the hip joints - could use some fine tuning. (I know, it's a sketch.) Here I mean with respect to choosing the right concept and refining it by measurement.  I can see you doing it with the grid.  So, it's just a matter of sticking with it a little farther (more of the same).

Reviewing my own demos I see things I didn't bother with when I was drawing.  I must have noticed them originally, but for some reason did not think it important to invest in correcting.  It's sometimes easier to skew one's perception than change the lines.  That's a habit I'm working to correct.